Loaded Words in Editorials

Begin with the sports commentary sheet, which shows connotation through two voices. Save the two-version rewrite for last so students can apply what they practiced.

Replace loaded words like scheme and monstrosity in an editorial against a parking garage. A loaded word has the same basic meaning as a neutral word but adds strong feeling, so writers use loaded words to steer readers toward an opinion. The directions on the page read: Each sentence comes from an editorial against a new parking garage. After Neutral, write a neutral word that could replace the underlined word. After Effect, explain in a few words what feeling the underlined word adds. An answer key is included.

Yes, both. We made it for 8th grade shades of meaning, and it works the same at home or at school. At home, a student can work through it alone and then go over it with you, which shows quickly what is solid and what needs another look. In class it works as independent practice, homework or a warm-up, and you can print one copy or a full set.

Words with the same meaning can leave readers with very different opinions. A commentator who calls a charge bold praises the player, while one who calls it reckless criticizes.

Swap neutral words for synonyms with a stronger feeling. An old house can become historic or decrepit, and a quiet man can become reserved or something less kind.

It is a feeling of approval a word carries. In an awards speech, assertive, inquisitive and candid praise the same behavior that pushy, nosy and blunt criticize.